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Unfinished.

lollipops && candyfloss,
heart♥shaped kisses && love felt hugs.

hugs, kisses && handheld whispers.
Everywhere, this mark has been made.
Then to the side of this picturesque
picture there's this strange skittle whore.

She does not shine && by no means
does she glow.
Her heart is a big, as a balloon on a string
&& she cares for everyone but herself.
She's a wild card which is dependable
&& an authentic nineteen fifties babydoll.

She's turning heads today;;
She has no idea as to why...
She's nothing special... although blonde haired.
blue eyed. Yet, she's everything you want.

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  • forbidden-colour
    March 24, 2008

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    "She does not shine && by no means
    does she glow.
    Her heart is a big, as a balloon on a string"

    Such beautiful imagery.
    Missed your work doll, one thing that I just want to thank you for is producing this wonderful poetry, it gives me support to know that someone else feels like me, but it's sad because I love you.

    I love this sweety,
    Thank you for being you and I hope your exam goes well. x