Death Vally is an abyss.
But, doesn't come close to how low I feel.
Mount Everest is tall.
Where I will never feel good in life.
The Pacific Ocean is wide.
As wide as, we being distant from each other.
The Antarctic is cold.
But, not nearly as cold as I feel lifeless.
The Sahara Dessert is so hot
Which i will never be, but you are already.
The Grand Canyon is big.
But, will never match up to how much I love you.
The Sun is bright.
As you are the Sun.
The Moon shines when the Sun graces it with it's presence.
I am the Moon.
For that we will always help shine where the other doesn't
But, never touch one another.
In this everlasting cycle.
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Humm..the thought structure and the immages given in the poetry here are quite strong and impressive as well..well done..and thanks for sharing..
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Hey there. I love your poem but you need to be in the Winklings group.
Join here if you are interested?
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Let me know. ~Pamela 
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