For Loves inferno holds my soul within its fiery grip
Engulfed in flames that make me whole, and yet I feel it slip
My Heart alight within your flame yet sanity’s depleting
A Raging fire that speaks my name whist at my life it’s eating
So Lost in heat creating bliss helpless I do fall
You Burn my lips with tender kiss and watch me as I crawl
Through ash and ember on hand and knee
My Charred remains left behind
My queen of fire I beg of thee
Let your heat Consume my humble mind
Author notes
this is a poem within a poem,
both color text read seperate or as one.
a form created by my good friend Amera
and the write of course
for my beautiful Girl, i love you baby
art by: Bakanekonei@deviantart.com
A contest entry
- poems with impact by know one.
380 points, ended March 6, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW...I am in total awe of this. You really did an awesome job writing this.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
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Aww
thankyou
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i really love this style of poem, im not sure if i could do one of these, this is really deep and intence and goes well with the picture, and the gold kinda looks like a flame within the red also, so cool, keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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Lexie... I envy you so damned much, you are so talented and beyond perfect...
Awesome write and hella creative
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Awww
thankyou sweet thing,
what a nice thing to say, but hunny
you have a powerful talent that is extremly envyable
i love you
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You rock girl! I love this style!
this is so romantic and sexy.
And written perfectly!
~Pastel
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awesome
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this is awesome
so very sensual baby
HOT Like FIRE hehe
I love the two poems withing one so different
I love you baby
may the fire always burn so hott.
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