He was my braille
when nightingales
sang dirges
to the dark side of the moon;
I'd been blinded by eclipses.
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
525 points, ended March 3, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Humm
"He was my braille" or he read you in braille?
Either way leaves a romantic implication.
What's up Island Girl?
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awwwww great write, very enjoyable ot read, and such a lovely pic with it, it really outlines the words well. great job and good lukc!!!
stephanie =) -
Whoa. Powerfully and creatively worded quickie write for sure. The image has so much strength added to it and the ending finishes of very well. Truly stunning. Ryan
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Truly the image beckons your words.
Beautiful!
Steve
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brilliant
as I am blinded by brilliance
Di you are such an artist
the first two lines made me sigh
the last three made me think
you are a wonderful talent lady
best wishes
peace and hugs
Muddy
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Hmm... This reminds me of one that you wrote the other night... Or at least I think it was you who wrote it. But I love the line about "he was my braille"... Well done, and good luck!
Laura xxx
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