Fear swallows
daylight;
Reclaim me
from icy hands
daylight;
Reclaim me
from icy hands
of mortality.
Author notes
Prompt: "Deliverance"
Provided by Bella.
Image credit: Intano at deviantART.
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A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this was so chilling....I wish I could write a dark piece half as well as this
I think you did well with the prompt and picture connects with your piece and prompt as well
congrats on bronze!
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Wonderful
Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.
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wow this is amazing beautufyl one and your words are so strong and really bring the prompt alive well done
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Exceptional!
Best wishes in the contest!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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The image goes along with the poem so nicely, The beginning is very captivating and makes me think of the imagery it gives off... Though I am curious when you say "Reclaim me from ice hands of mortality" what are you asking to reclaim you Fear?
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No... It's more of a plea to a higher power
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ooo, i really like the way that you went with this piece. the prompt, the pic, and the write go perfect together. there's not really much that i can say on this because i have a raging headache, but i will comment back when the guy with the sledgehammer leaves my skull.
Rob
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