No sense in staying here baby
I'm all locked up inside
To in love with my saddness
but i want to let it go
I sit in this chair
that you have left me in
paralyzed by fear
wondering whats wrong with me
No one understands me
but i can's seem to break free
my will is lost
and my death will be alone
I forgive you
for all that you've done
the hurt and pain that you caused
because now I'm free of your control
No sense in staying here baby
I'm all locked up inside
To in love with my saddness
but i want to let it go.
Author notes
my song was Lithium by Evanescence
Disturbedmess
In a list
A contest entry
- music = life ♥ by CatastrophicSmile.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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realllly good poem
i esp like the idea of being inlove with your own sadness
the 4th verse is the best tho - SO true
ive missed readin ur stuff!
x
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awesomeness babe♥
this is good-im so happy to see you writing again ive missed it
good luck
Dead Star--x
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i love this! its always nice to know someone else feels (or seems to at least) the same as you, which is part of the reason i liked this so much. you did a great job writing this and getting the emotion accross. Keep it up!
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thank you, i always feel better when i know that other people are going through the same thing that i am
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