rejoice, hope springs eternal,
mother nature is a tigress,
thriving, amid green, leafy, irradiant forests,
surging white streams.
oak trees are hooded villains,
swayed sensuously
by a whistling wind;
a willow, i waft, at one with nature.
you are a gentle elk,
smelling the dew droplets,
feeling the bracken underfoot,
hearing yellowhammers singing.
blue skies, powerful oceans,
majestic mountains, sport stalwart pumas,
nature strives, succeeding she
buds a bright new future, filled with promise.
Author notes
i used option 4
A contest entry
- Let's Get the Ink Flowing!!! by Auburn Sunrise.
1800 points, ended March 16, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very Nice
Very well written and flowed like water. Wonderful use of phrase and description. A Wonderful Piece! Trophy material
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This is so picturesque-
What a gorgeous piece!
Your word choices are just
so delightfully enchanting!
Love this!
Good luck!
~Pastel
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Awesome!
I love the connections with nature and hope. I could completely envision the beautiful scenery being described - and it took my breath away!
I also love that you used senses other than sight to describe this: sound and touch.
A wonderful write and a great entry to this contest! Thank you so much for entering it. I thoroughly enjoyed it and feel renewed, refreshed, revigorated!
Thank you again!
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