Such loss profound in deepest pain
no words your feelings can explain,
it seems the world has crashed around
as you wonder if peace will ever be found.
Deep within strength has been placed
so this tragedy can be faced,
God knows the suffering you're going through
His angels sent to keep an eye on you.
He holds your babies in His care
and of your pain is most aware,
one day you will see them once more
that time you're welcomed through heaven's door.
In life God has a plan for all
and many times we'll stumble and fall
your heart is full of love you've shared
there are many others who need your care.
You have much love to share around
so many need to hear that sound
I know that for your babies you yearn
and when it's time to them you'll return.
Make the most of the love you've learned
for God will send you strength in turn
to love the little ones that are alone
and show them love they've never known.
Author notes
For Susanna
In a list
A contest entry
- I need prayers and inspirational writes. Judged by RedwingSpirit.
4941 points, ended March 10, 2008, 31 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Precious!!
Beautiful words of healing You have brought forth and this tugs at the Heartstrings
Powerful energy exuded to help soothe
Marvelous verse
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Excellent verse. Flows nicely and I love the comforting message of this piece.
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This is so beautiful, not everyone could take a prompt like this and take it to such heights of emotion... beautifully penned, goodluck in the contest
Karen
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oh this is a beautiful dedication gran your words are so beautifully inspired and display alot of care and love.im sure it wil help well done gran
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This is very beautiful Thanks for this I am sure it will help Marks daughter Cara
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