A
Great
Poet
And a sweet
Soul that we all love
The kindness person you will find
Allie, Auburn Sunshine, a compassionate Angel
Auburn Sunshine; beautiful as a morning sunrise
I'm honoured to have her friendship
A darling cutie
Heart warming
Allie
Love
You
Author notes
option number 3
For a sweet poet, Allie
Photo taken by her husband John
Poetic form: Fibonacci sequence.
How the sequence works is in the first line you have one syllable as well as in the second, in your third line you have two syllables, the forth you have three, the fifth has five, the six has eight, and in the last line you have thirteen syllables. So it goes :
1,1,2,3,5,8,13
Mirrored fibonacci
1,1,2,3,5,8,13,13,8,5,3,2,1,1
A contest entry
- Let's Get the Ink Flowing!!! by Auburn Sunrise.
1800 points, ended March 16, 2008, 30 entries
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Lovely dedication to a friend ......Seems you know all the forms , how is that ? lol....awesome
peace
Rob...
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Aww that was so cute!!! She sounds like a lovely person, and you have done her justice with this love poem!! Looks fab on the page.
Great work!
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Wow! Poem is terrific and the photo is breah taking. Her eyes are my fav feature
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Awww!!!!
Thank you for making me smile!!!
Love the form, the background, the wording! John will be happy you credited him for taking the picture (I always forget to do that - lol).
Thank you so much for this adorable, wonderful entry!!!
I may have to steal this background.
You're a wonderful friend, David. It's so nice to see you writing again - and something so filled with friendship, hope, happiness.
You really made my day!
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This is a very pretty poem that you have written for her I hope she enjoys it have a great day today love Genna
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A beautiful dedication to a beautiful poet and friend. Penned by the King of mathamatical poetry, in perfect form you have me in awe of your talent and your compassion for other poets. Very well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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A lovely poem. I love the form you used. It really adds to the beauty of your words. Thank you for sharing. Take care, Sandy.
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