I edge toward the dark hallway,
Anxiety warping to almost cold fear as I step through the door.
I slink and sit in the corner,
But my mind just wants to collapse on the floor.
I gaze across the room and see her face,
A maelstrom of emotions swell in my chest.
I observe the one that plagues my dreams,
And realise that with her i am obsessed.
I wonder if we could ever be together,
But i know that i am living a delusion
I realise that i could never be with her,
I realise that this love is an illusion.
I head for the door but turn and catch her eyes,
I know that my feelings for her she can now see.
So run away to a place where I feel safe and secure
And spend another night with no arms just sheets to hold me.
Yet again without her.
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i agree with 'dangerous-mistake' ... this was such a warming poem, although rather sad.
you give the reader a sense of strong love and lonliness....
but in this depressing state, it is thus beautiful.
a lovely write
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It's so sweet. Whoever she is, is very lucky to have someone admire her the way you do.
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its really good
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I can totalyy relate to this
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this is Stephy Hollies best friend yuur poems are amazing!!! Yuu r so full of emotion. I wish i had met someone like yuu!! Hollie is so lucky!! But then again yuu r luvky to have Hollie!! Shes real special and very rare!!! lol..... me and hollie both no wot its like to madly love some1 but they dnt no how yuu feel. Its tough... but hollies here 4 yuu. And i kinda am even thou yuu dont no me!! lol
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omg that is soooooooooo sweet. I am such a hopeless romantice, I wish she'd see you for who you really are and fall madly in love with you, but she is probably madly in love with you anyway and I am rambling so.....I luv u bro!
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why can't you be with her. what pain to be so lonley
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Rad poem
this is a great write, you can see the pain your going through without over doing it and sounding like a poser.
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I know how you feel. you can feel the pain in ur write...
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