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The One I Love

I give my love to thee
I give all of me
Yet the one I love
Never did see

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    December 6, 2008
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    Humm..sigh..this is very thought provoking and you made me to think about the non reciprocal attitude of the life...thanks for sharing


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 22, 2008

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    Humm..truely and impressive reaction in poetry depicting the truth of love..thanks for sharing..and yes thanks for commenting on my work..hope all is well..after a long time I heard from you..be well..my friend..

  • Papagallo
    March 2, 2008

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    OH this is so true. i have been there done that. Results nill. I could never understand a love that is not returned. You said so much in just four lines.


  • Jade-x
    March 2, 2008
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    wow, powerful x
    love it.


  • oldschooldee1
    March 2, 2008
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    short but very deep straight to the point but good indeed.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 2, 2008

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    Aww! That's sad... to give all of yourself to someone, and yet they don't see what is right in front of them! I've been there...

    A short write that says so much in those tender words!

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