I give my love to thee
I give all of me
Yet the one I love
Never did see
Please tell me what you think
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Humm..truely and impressive reaction in poetry depicting the truth of love..thanks for sharing..and yes thanks for commenting on my work..hope all is well..after a long time I heard from you..be well..my friend..


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OH this is so true. i have been there done that. Results nill. I could never understand a love that is not returned. You said so much in just four lines.
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wow, powerful x
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short but very deep straight to the point but good indeed.
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Aww! That's sad... to give all of yourself to someone, and yet they don't see what is right in front of them! I've been there...
A short write that says so much in those tender words!

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