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Her blessing



She wakes the twinkle of stars in misty wings,
casting a spell, with magic of azure eyes;

She lures, with charming lashes of blue,
and captures a soul, in delirious trance;

She heals, the bleeding ruptures of past,
and weaves spirited gold in ivory tapestry.

Heart sings, the ancient tunes of innocent mirth,
of pacified soul, in harmony's blessed lap.

She smiles, at the soul's metamorphosis -
as it sprouts butterfly wings, of inhaled epiphany.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    Beautiful take from the prompt
    Your words are wonderful and gentle
    Paints my mind and touches my heart
    Thank you for your entry and good luck
    Julie


    • sunflowerpoet
      March 4, 2008
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      Thank you for hosting the contest, and thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I appreciate your comments.
      ~Sunflower.