I lay in your arms,
In love, and at bliss,
I look deep in your eyes,
And I savor your kiss,
I lay apon your chest,
Completely at ease,
Completely I’m yours
I want only to please,
We lay together,
So happy, so free,
And we have forever,
To love you and me.
Author notes
For my love, Evan Johnson. I love you babe!
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love. No PW by LanguishedLad.
700 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a short but sweet write. you describe those perfect moments of love, and being at ease with the person you love. i also liked the rhythm this piece had while reading. nicely done. keep up the good work, and best of luck in the contest <3
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thank you I'm glad you liked it!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you penman. I'm glad you enjoied it.
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well penned
I liked this alot short and sweet with emotion through out. thankyou for entering and best of luck in the competition.
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I'm glad you enjoied it.
and thank you for the speedy comment!
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