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Apathy is not overrated

You're right next door to hell
And you know it,
But don't write your letters to me.

I won't answer nor will I care,
When I hear of your fall from grace.

Maybe I'll laugh
or shake my head in pity,
Then turn back to what I'm doing
and forget it ever happened.

It's what you'd do, right?

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yeppers.

meeee-ow

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  • UnravledLove
    June 10, 2008

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    This makes me laugh because just recently I have been saying the same thing to this one guy. I really like your whole first stanza it snatches me to keep reading. Nice Job!

  • Paradise Prisoner
    March 7, 2008
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    harsh..it stings. a very strong write, jessie.
    tu amiga,
    Paradise Prisoner


  • captaincrazy
    March 2, 2008

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    This is quite good kid.
    I'm guessing it's about someone who's name rhymes with WHO?!
    very good write.
    Loved it actually.
    :]


  • dreamsxcalling
    March 2, 2008
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    I like it, a lot. Especially the first stanza

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