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Eternity Begins

Day fades into night
The sky turns black
The stars no longer hide
The come out to show me the light

I will wait here
for you until eternity is no more
You are my angel
Tonight starts the rest of my life

You are so sick of the tears
so sick of the pain
let me free you from this life
let your blood flow through my veins
I will kiss you in the night
a kiss as cold as death
tonight your sorrow ends
And eternity begins

Any way I can improve my writing, It has been a while

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  • xsadxnegix
    March 2, 2008
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    wow......beautiful


  • xXxgivingxXxupxXx
    March 2, 2008
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    pretty frickin' sweet

    nice. it gave me shivers. i love vampires and this is awesome.