If I could innocently kiss your face
Between statements of my love
And gratitude for the things for me
That you have done
I would do this at the end of each day
In place of complaints and heartaches won
A contest entry
- A Lovers Question by DrkPoet.
450 points, ended March 12, 2008, 27 entries
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ok.. so this has to be my favorite of yours.... well.. maybe not.. cuz apparently i havent read them all.. but this pops into my head atleast has often as i think of it....
so i came back .. to read it again. -
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Thanks. I'm glad you like it.
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The title fits perfectly
and as for the poem itself...it speaks for itself
Now in between this statement im writing,
you get an innocent kiss on your forehead
for sharing this lovelt piece
Ken
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A tender poem that expresses your true feelings... Its simple but sweet. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
animated
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There's so much we would do only, if we could.
This is very nice.
I'm reading for the contest, just trying to do my share in the judging.
Good luck.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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you would think i was wierd if i commented again...
.... so i wont...
oh wait.. nevermind
its just that good ! -
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Funny funny boy you are. . .I'm glad I adopted you as a pseudo-brother
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in fact.. if i could... i would give it a million clappies
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so.. i couldnt get this out of my head... so i came back and read it again... and again
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Look it's like you somehow gave me 4 of those guys when 3 is the limit. . .you are good!
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ya know what... this makes me want to write poetry.. but heres the problem.. its just too good.. so eloquent (sp) .. i just cant get it out of my head long enough to think of anything.....
it was awesome -
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Thanks you are far too nice
But I wish you would write some poems
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ok.... now that i just read it again, it reads like an evening prayer.
thinking of all that is given to me through the day and focusing on being thankful for ALL... good and bad, because i know that God uses everything to bring me closer to Him... hard to swallow sometimes, though.
whoa... just think what i will get out of this if i read it a third time!
but if i do... i'll keep the thoughts to myself and not bore you with all of my 'insight' haha.
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oh my (pause to wipe tear)...
i can't even think what to say.. which you know is a rare thing for me
i FEEL like this... one chance to do that, to let someone know that we are grateful for what they have done... let them know our love isn't just given in good times.
replacing complaints and seeing negative with thank yous and seeing a bright future when we tend to turn our heads to avoid seeing it.
ok.. ok... i guess i could think of a few tihngs to say... i told you it was rare that i couldn't.
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You can never write too much for me to read!!!
Thanks for all your comments. . .unfortunately for the woman who this poem is about her chances are up and the poem is all that there is
Wouldn't it be great if we could do this for someone who deserves it the most though Someone who we could never repay enough? (you know Who I mean)
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Short but so completely heartfelt. How nice it would be to end everyday with someone you love just like that. Thanks for your entry
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