As I lay in the field of flowers with the illuminating moon
revealing the petals dancing in the cool summer night
I see an amazing sky filled with flickering lights.
Stars weary of company grow dim on the edges of the universe.
Blazing passion flows through the adjacent constellations.
Burning with a joyous yellow glow for eternity next to one another,
What an awe-filled sight.
My hat is off to you, congratulations to the magnificent couple.
A contest entry
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300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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i really like the word choice in this poem...its definatly more mature and subtle
peace, love, & cheese -
This is a very romantic poem that you have written here, and definately fitting for a couple that gets married
thank you for entering the contest - I wish you all the best!
Leander -
Romantic and beautifully crafted, the closing line is so joyous that it really closes this in a wonderful way. Excellent job writing this.
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The sentiment within your words is wonderful. Iy is always fantastic to see two people in love and happy.
Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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nice -write. The couple is happy.
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