Big brown fluffy round thing.
Revoking our smoking way.
While he is baked all day.
Saying we should watch when we baked a chicken wing.
When he is the on that starts fire thing
Cause he is very gay
He gets baked all day.
While everyone runs away.
From what he did that day.
That fire starting crazy thing.
Which ate our burnt chicken wing.
From the remains of where we used to stay.
Now it is burned away.
By that pot smoken bear that visited that day.
A contest entry
- Just For Fun: Things that make me say, "HUH ????" by Everwind Rising.
1600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
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Comments
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Poor Smokey, you are rating out on him, he he. I guess he's just another hypocrite saying one thing and doing another. Sort of like our politicians!
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this is a lovely piece, it's really emotive and powerful, a brilliant write, well written and easily read well done. =)
Jess xXx
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This definitely fits the contest requirements because it's both fun and it also makes me say "Huh?! WTF, Mate?!" I've never seen Smokey the Bear this way until you pointed this personality out for me. Thank you for showing me the way. He truely is a strange creature and this is definitely a strange poem to capture him in. Great work! Keep it up!
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Haha, nice. I personally think if I ever saw a grizzley bear in a park ranger outfit I would quesion entirely which one of us was baked...both of us?
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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ha ha!!!
This poem reminds me of the Far-Side Gallery cartoon where all Smokey the Bears little forest buddies put burning pine tree candles on his birthday cake!
Thanks for giving me a good laugh today!!
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Very funny!
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Wow! This was great! I really did laugh. I am shocked. Probably because I have not read any of your poetry. Because if I did I would already know you are a amazing writer. Good luck... In Love & Light Blessed Be! ~~Shannon~~
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