In the shadows as the sun falls
Between classes; in the blackened halls
Steal your hand and clasp it in mine
Whispering our names; were stuck in time
The feel of your arms; holding me close
To know that you missed me the most
Flying through each day, on repeat
Waiting for the bell, to then jump on my feet
Seeing you there, waiting for me
If our parents saw us, they would disagree
Our fobidden actions always have to wait
Only when they're not looking, we wont hesitate.
Author notes
This is about me and my boyfriend's first few months dating. Our parents didn't want us to date, but we did anyway. -^^- So, I hope this poem fits the requirements for your contest!
A contest entry
- Secret Love by piccola.
650 points, ended October 22, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awww this is cute!
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Irregular rhyming, huh? Good one, I liked the feeling there.
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wonderful neechan! hehe. You have forbidden actions with your felix. lol. dirty! jkjk. dont kill me since im sitting next to you and you cant see what im writing. Anyways very cute poem!
~oneechan~
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Great!
That was very well written and easy to read... and just about everyone can relate with the sentiment
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oh this is very good
i loved your rhyming...
"Our fobidden actions always have to wait
Only when they're not looking, we wont hesitate. "
my favourite lines from your poem
xxx he broke me
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Domo arigato! Thank you very much! ^^
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