she wonders alone
isolated, rejected
the night angry at her back
lightning flashes, thunder roars
rain pours down upon her head
as another tear falls
washed away as quickly as shed
she cries out
hoping to be heard
but drowned out by thunder
her body numb
cold, emotionless
sad stories and thoughts
lie dormant within
never to be shared
no friends, family, loved ones
rejected by all
completely alone in this world
.................................
she stops suddenly
her eyes widen
alone....but FREE
a small smile escapes her lips
she may have to wonder far and wide
but life will get better
she may not have been good enough
at least not for them
but she'd find someone
someone to take her in
someone to love
someone to love her
.................................
she glances upwards
a single drop of rain
runs down her cheek
the sun emerges
escaping its grey prison
throwing out rays of light
she nods to herself
and continues onwards
towards the horizon
Author notes
the breaks were supposed to represent thought changes.
Please tell me what you think
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Also, this peice is very influential! Very positive! Great work!
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what a wonderfully written poem, it is superb! I could feel the cold sharp blade of loneliness peirce my chest as I was captivated by your writting! You have a beautiful gift-quite amazing, please never give up writing, have you considered publishment? by the way, I think it is great and very creative that you role play as a wolf, I have role played atleast once and enjoyed it, and I love wolves-there are mystical, beautiful creatures that should always be respected! God bless you, if you don't mind me asking-would you like to be my AP sister?
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beautiful poem. sometimes thoughh when continuing forward it does involve things from the past. this is absoutly a great poem and one I would love to hear you read aloud. keep writing
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very powerful...you could picture it in your mind...amasing!!! i loved it.
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FIVE STARS *****
wonderful job. a refreshing break from all the 'poems about death' as mr. shilling would put it! lol very inspirational. and i understood wat the breaks were there for. luved it!
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oops, I forgot to applause. Sorry!!!
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Very Realistic in the modern day world where the restraints upon individuals are growing stronger day by day. I'm glad that there are still people who look to the light even in the bleak gray of winter. The title works well with the content and seems to add to the message infinatly. There is always a horizen I think, whether it is in the bright colors of hope or the duller colors of despair, sometimes you have to paint your own sky. Great Job!
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