A child flies quickly,
mayonnaise in hair,
spitting candy to hippy trees.
Alone, with imagination,
he builds his floppy tower,
smelling rocks of olde.
Climbing, handless,
stepping over monsters
and through permed hair
he drools a rope
of which he climbs.
Char-broiled, he sleeps.
Author notes
Bah-hah-hah.
A contest entry
- Just For Fun: Things that make me say, "HUH ????" by Everwind Rising.
1600 points, ended March 17, 2008, 20 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Teehee
Comments
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Shifting, ever-changing imagery makes for some ... unique pictures. Definitely a HUH?! poem. Very cool.
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Love your title. Great juxtapositions. Especially enjoyed "through permed hair he drools a rope of which he climbs." congrats on the bronze!
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HUH?! That's just the type of thing I was looking for. Great!
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yes. That definately makes me go..... HUH?!
I guess that's what it is suppose to do.
~ wonderful job
Good luck in YOUR contest
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