Seeking to find...
Desperate to seek...
The truth that I have not known.
Bigger beyond...
Smaller within...
Nothing can ever be the same again.
You're beyond...
I'm within...
I'm reaching out... to be there again.
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MyxRealXStage
A contest entry
- Rule by the People round two by star wars fanatic.
450 points, ended March 24, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It appears you are legit. I apologise for my insult on your interpretation of the poem; it's just that several people have tried to sneak in so far, so I'm a lil defensive. I'm sorry for my speed to overlook any subjectivity in your piece, have re-read and saw how you drew that from the pic. Thanks for entering, and can you still put your name in the box please?
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This doesn't really have anything to do with the pic and your author's name isn't in the box. If you are a finalist from the last round, please put your screen name, if not, I'll check and remove your entry. Sry, but this is invite only.
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