You are hot as you are cold
you are far as you are bold
Believing truths that are half lies
Only the author can effect the lines
Only the chef declines who dines
Believing lies that are capricious and trite
Never give a reason that is not a fact
Never decieve a friend with an act
Fabrication deminishes your plight
Leaving here just feels unfinished
Leaving makes me feel diminished
Mistrust is just part of the fight.
Author notes
strange how only the author is the only one who can omit comments. no lie.
A contest entry
- poems with impact by know one.
380 points, ended March 6, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
say what?
Comments
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You amaze me!Good luck in the contest!
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ooooh interesting, very well done!
best of luck in contest hun
TAsha
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Good thought and expression of it!!!!! Things are not always as they should be, but we can hope that words and thoughts can bring about a change when one is needed!!!!!
I enjoyed this piece!!!!!! Best wishes in the contest!! -
I would hope that is the way it is as that is the way it should be, were you told different or what? Another cool write!
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