I lay awake,
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and now, I understand.
I'm not to blame, it was NEVER....my fault.
Author notes
15th AP Poem posted.
In a list
A contest entry
- Partners in crime group please by Partners In Crime.
450 points, ended March 18, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
The Art used in ANY of my pieces I claim not as my own, I do give credit to the Artists talent, that sometimes happens to coincide with my Poetry. Thanks for your support in what I do from my Heart
Comments
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very short but speaks great volume, makes you think.
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Thanks SouldDancer
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Sometimes when we are upset we reach a point like the eye of a hurricane when realization dawns, we might be taking the blame for something we have no control over This is very powerful, good luck in the contest
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Thanks queen.
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My fifteenth poem I'm sure was deleted not long after it was posted back in 2004, I delete most of my stuff, lol.
People would love for us to take all the blame, to shift it on us and often we accept that, maybe from guilt or shame, who knows, but eventually, if we are able to break free, we see what has been done and come to the realization that your poem does.
That doesn't mean I still won't blame others when I'm wrong.
Thanks for making me think, my head hurts now!
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Thanks for the comment on this.
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Ofcourse my Sexy Sis
you're not to blame on anything...sometimes it's just how life blows you around...
I love these few words that are telling so much about how we can feel sometimes...
XXJeannette
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Thanks beauty
lubbs you
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powerful in so few words! awesome work! thanks for taking the time to enter.
Tasha
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Thanks
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There are often times in life where a woman takes on guilt for things that are not her fault. Its important to take some responsibility for what IS your fault, but its not fair to have to be the martyr. This is a strong message, made stronger by the breifness of the statement.
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Thanks and you are right.
I appreciate your comment on this Sarah.
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" WOW "
What can I say you always somehow manage to make me feel like you were painting a picture and it speaks for it's self. well done.
Good Luck in the contest.
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Heyyyy....
Thank you so much, I really appreciate anytime you stop by.
E
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That was so very clever and good...Best wishes in the contest...
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Thanks J aime
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It's important to accept the responsibility of being at fault... and it's just as important to not take the blame when we're not.
A short but impressive write, a strong message
Good luck in the contest
Dee
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Thank you so much
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i see that your meditation bought you a sense of understanding. This is great! Short and to the point. I love it!
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You are learing me pretty good mo
thanks always
Lady♥
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yes you should just o u have i was about to say throw these in a nice list because its like a whole other side of you on a deeper level you are expressing a lot in these right with out making them all long i loved it
roses for the lady
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Thanks again, you makin me blush.
Ephiphany♥
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Beautiful write, Sis. This had a peaceful feeling to it. I think it's important in life that people acknowledge that things aren't their fault. Sometimes love isn't just meant to be and people can try to look on the bright side of things and learn to live and grow. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.
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Yes it is important.
Thanks again for reading.
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