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Goodbye My Love

I never knew I would change
I loved him so much for so long
But it didn't make any sense
I just hurt myself each time

All I do is give all of me
My heart my soul my life
I sacrifice in every way possible
I tried too much for too long

I earn nothing but pain
Suffering waiting for pure love
He couldn't give it to me
I waited too much for too long

Goodbye my love forever
At last goodbye has come

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  • How deep a portrayal of a sad situation that all too many people come into. Love has to be two way for it to work - one person can give their all to no avail when it is not returned my sympathy if this is what has happened to you.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Ah..the story of the love is in the words..and the story of the tears is in the poetry ..no words..making me spechless you are..a touching piece....


  • eleno
    March 7, 2008

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    thats sad, im so sorry, but perhaps its all for the best. just wait to see what fate holds as surprise for you. -eleno

  • pruedence
    March 7, 2008

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    Postive words of someone who knows what they want in love and need. Powerful giving me a sense that the person is secure with themself. Well done, uplifting read, thanks for sharing