Remove glance from pale direction
for withered is spirit
with no foreseen resurrection
to hold hope's candle lit
Grimly remembrance taunts light
with shadows distorted
to vanquish shining stars once bright
as dreams die aborted
Author notes
6. SAD/DEPRESSING
A contest entry
- _.:*~*:._.:*~*OPTIONS: BIG POINTS*~*:._.:*~*:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
2200 points, ended March 12, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. This was so sad. Great work though.
Good Luck,
Erika
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Good luck in the contest. So glad i saw contest, as this is sooooo sad, Brilliantly penned indeed
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as usual, you have managed to capture the prompt with an intake of my breath - the last two lines sum it up nicely too
well done!
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Oh my God
This has broken my heart I LOVE YOU You cant feel this way Sigh sigh Love you loads and loads
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I is ok.
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awww this is great. love the descriptons, and soo lonely and giving up on all feeling of this poem, great job and good luk in the contest =)
stephanie
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oh this is such a sad piece. you feeling ok? you have to be happy or we might scare the pretty rainbow pony away
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