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Faded Youth

 
Memories faded into distance
Left alone in the dark.
A little child, sweet and innocent,
locked in a box.
 Resistance was for naught,
there was no strength to fight.
Now faded - child's image,
faded - child's memory.
Sweet child,
my lovely,
alone in that box.
No breath, no beat,
alone in that box. 

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Picture:
Sunlight_Spotlight_IV_by_RodRego at www.deviantart.com

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Im not sure how I got this from this picture... but hey thats the point of being inspired right

Hope u like it

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    March 3, 2008

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    Powerfully Scripted

    and perfect for the picture; this is the silent movie I saw when I first saw this picture and I am thrilled to read this strength filled write

    ♥
    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    March 2, 2008
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    bunnies


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    March 2, 2008
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  • Celticmoon
    March 1, 2008

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    The worse thing any child can suffer is something traumatic that causes them to hide inside. No child should be forced to do that. They must grow and blossom in to wonderful and beautiful adults to help spread wisdom and love, not hide in shame and always self blame. Wonderfully done hunny!




    Love Always,
    Mum