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Humming Bird Moth Undercover



My proboscis I dip,
as your nectar I sip
from your colourful stocks
of sweet fragrent phlox,
and I nip flower to flower, wings blurred.

I'm not afraid see,
a moth net will get me,
for though prettier than you,
I'm much cleverer too,
and disguised as a cute humming-bird.








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  • Hummingbirdlove gold member
    May 6

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    Funny that the name my grandfather and Native American gave me the name Hummingbird because he said I was always fluttering around. Moths fascinate me. Good combination


  • Lyndon gold member
    March 30

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    I agree

    a shorttish poem but characterization is there. Pleasant rhyme and complete little cameo occasion!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    March 4

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    You certainly did give this little guy/gal some character. I did enjoy this. Thank you for your entry. ~Pamela