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The lessons

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Hi was her braille
each tender touch
taught her of wind's songs
and magic,
and darkness dissipated
into the night.

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  • Wandika gold member
    March 2
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    Nice Di


  • solo wisp gold member
    March 1
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    Beautiful take on the prompt.

    "...and darkness dissipated into the night."

    Love this.


  • M a r l u x i a
    March 1
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    Love the beginning! Capturing write. Good luck!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    March 1

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    awwww this is amazing, soo beautiful, a lovely wonderful write, best of luck in the contest !
    stephanie =)
  • Nighttime angel
    March 1

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    WOW, this is a beautiful & incredible poem. I even got shivers down my spine while reading this. you did an excellent job with the prompt.

    good luck

    kat

  • markgrif gold member
    March 1
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    This is original and well writ.

    Much love,
    Mark


  • Immortal Obscurity silver member
    March 1

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    Wow, this is gorgeous, Di! "He was her braille" was my favourite line for sure! Well done, and good luck!

    Laura xxx

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