The sky cries out
The wrath of the heavens
Descend upon us
The wind roars
Swirling with God's servants
Haunting the shamed society
Bolts of despair
Attack those who have turned their backs
On the heavenly father
Author notes
37 words
Prompt is: Roll of thunder chasing the wind
30 to 40 words
16 entries
A contest entry
- prompt; 16 entries; 30-40 words by Grey Mouser.
450 points, ended March 8, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - God-sized Hole by magdelene.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - God will not prevent the storm, but He will help you through it. by Kooks.
300 points, ended May 14, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you for your entry. Not sure how it relates to hope, but still i enjoyed it very much.
Good luck in the contest -
Well done and filled with good metahpor. Linking Gods wrath with the images of natures fury. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
ah thunderstorms, i love them, they are great to watch, i like the religious theme implanted with the theme, bolts of despair - i don't know about chasing the wind but i am forever chasing the day despite individuality, my evil twin lol
a good poem.
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