Its time to let go
Let go of all I want
All I have
All my love
I whisper
I reach to my bedside
Grab the knife
As I slowly stroke the knife against my skin
I wonder
Do I deserve to live?
As the blood slowly drips down my arm
I realize
I do not deserve to live
Author notes
5. DARK/SINISTER--Write something really dark. I'm talking gruesome! I love blood and gore, so give me that. BUT, it must be written eloquently, if not, I'll still take it, but I may not like it as much
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A contest entry
- _.:*~*:._.:*~*OPTIONS: BIG POINTS*~*:._.:*~*:._ by Erika Elektrikka.
2200 points, ended March 12, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything that is funny,or dark and visually appealing by Alive Again.
550 points, ended April 11, 2008, 38 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - so..how about the bronze winners now? by Cat10.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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thank you for entering! this is a very dark poem! I really like it, probably because this is how I write too. you did a wonderful job and good luck!
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really good it was what i was looking for thanx for entering
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Wow. This is sad...just what I wanted
Good Luck
Erika
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I like this. The immagery is fantastic and it has great flow. I have felt this way more times than I can count. Great job and goodluck in the contest.
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