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Mirror

I glance up at the mirror
My fingers trace the broken glass
A drop of red begins to fall
Sliding down the craked cold mass

I slide in a breath
Closing my eyes
I fight the temptation
My hearts pain hits the skys

Resisting the pain
Resisting the cut
Resisting the pull
Resisting the but...

I hold my breath
Turn my back
Wonder why
I made that crack

Run to a sink
Look at yourself
wash your hands
Keep your health

This might make you feel better
The razor blade scars on your wrists
This is something i never shouldve done
It all comes down to this....

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option 2

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  • Kassandra Nyktos
    March 9, 2008

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    good write...I really like it...please abide by the rules and put your option number in please or I'll have to DQ


    Kass


  • Blooming Poet
    March 7, 2008
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    Cutting is bad *nono*
    but this poem is very goodd


  • LostInTheDream
    March 7, 2008
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    Nice

    I really like this the end was great