Your love is lost upon a ship of dreams,
Then through daybreak your true heart screams.
Beauty swims so deep into your dark eyes,
Until sleep captures, your lonley heart cries.
Passion; like an ocean swells in your heart,
But the loneliness threatens to pull it apart.
Trust is broken and cannot protect you,
Now you will doubt even that which is true.
I will wait for you until you awaken,
And you can forgive what has been taken.
I will wait patiently for your warm smile,
Until you're free from this painful trial.
Sleep well tonight as you sail on alone,
Pray, do not return with a heart of stone.
Author notes
Gallery - Air and Water - Astral Voyage
http://www.josephinewall.co.uk/josephine.html
A contest entry
- Picture inspired by whispernthedark.
635 points, ended March 15, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is wonderful, extremely well written. Thank you for putting the gallery & title, I didn't realize that the link would only go to the main page. You captured your chosen picture perfectly. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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I really loved the ending to this poem... it was beautiful... you don't have the link to the poem though? I would like to see what inspired this wonderful write
the rhyming was very well done and you maintained a good flow throughout
Keep writing
Polly
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omg i so love it it is beaustiful
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