makeup smears
across
my sleepless face
charcoal mascara
seeps into every pore
filling my body
and soul
with self hatred fueled
by my lost hopes
and lonely tears
Author notes
1. Raccoon Eyes of Joy's Mascara
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A contest entry
- PiF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything that is funny,or dark and visually appealing by Alive Again.
550 points, ended April 11, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Total misery by X-xElectrax-X.
500 points, ended June 14, 2008, 14 entries
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good job
good luck in the contest
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good luck and thank you
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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