A sickening feeling in the pit of my gut,
multiple personalities show at any time.
One minute you're fine,the next you're a butt,
it makes no good sense, no reason or rhyme.
One minute so sensual and loving,
in the next depressed and abusive.
Slapping me around pushing and shoving,
the jury is out, results inconclusive.
I'm done with it now, finally got free,
living my life, without all the pain.
Now I know what it is to be me,
I no longer care that you're insane.
We once had it all, the golden ring,
what a difference a few years can bring.
Author notes
I got free from the abuse and pain, you can too
A contest entry
- Make me feel again by lilblueeyesmine1978.
300 points, ended March 23, 2008, 62 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The peices dont fit anymore by Talitha777.
413 points, ended December 6, 2008, 14 entries
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Comments
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wow i like how you've expressed yor freedom in this piece well done a wonderful read x me and my family moved from our home across the contry to be free from the same abuse, very touching, its brilliant now we are free, and so are you x amazing x
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Heck yeah. This describes me and my first husbands realtionship to a tee. Thanks for letting me know that somone else is confused and just can't care anymore.
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nice poem great expression
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