You once lived for forever
And soared on wings of Fate
In cascading gems of existance
A diamond encrusted persistance
In a jaded and emerald instance
You once lived for forever
You once lived for eternity
And held the hand of Fate
In a waterfall of starry skies
The ebony satin of your eyes
In a moment reveals your cold disguise
You once lived for eternity
You once lived for a world of time
And danced the dance of Fate
In darkness when the World was new
You gave a love, that love was true
And all blind eyes were turned to you
You once lived for a world of time
You once lived for forever
And clutched the heart of Fate
In vibrant colours, sunset hue
A dream took wing, and strong it flew
Throughout the world and back to you
You once lived for forever
Comments
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Such a delight my dear Sister!!! Magical words you pen! Taking me on mystic jouneys with your words...*sigh*
Blessed Be~

Az

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Outstanding!
I bow my head and realize I will never write as this.

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Neatly done! I just LOVE the scheme with the three rhymes in a row. And the repetition was nice too. This is a pretty poem!




