It don't matter if you're jewish, it don't matter if you're christian,
it don't matter if you're catholic, it ain't about the religion,
as long as you know about the God that created your soul,
ready or not, i'm gonna explain it, let's go.
Some believe in Adam and Eve, others in evolution,
they get into arguments, i'm like "why not just combine them?"
They wrinkle their noses, disgust on their face,
"I thought you were christian, where's all your faith?"
It ain't like that, no i still beleive in God,
it's just that i want my ideas to be broad.
You can take the christain route, give your life to Jesus,
yes, i'll admit it, i believe this:
God sent his son, i hope everyone knows,
he died, then three days later he rose.
Guards laughed as he was beat with a wip,
died for our sins but never pouted his lips.
Others believe Mohammed was the rock,
now people out there be like "hold up and just stop!"
Both these people i've mentioned, who do you think they were sent?
By God up above and their whole life it was spent,
spreading the word, talking about the Lord,
they tried to save the world.
So no matter the religion,
whether you're catholic or christian,
don't be hating don't be fighting,
'cause you know God will be waiting.
Comments
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A Profound message within this well written composition
Very Very Well Done!!

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as a poem or writing, this is very well written. has a nice rhyme scheme. but as far as the content, I can't agree. whether you meant to or not, it sounds like you are hinting at all gods or the same or there's more than on way to heaven, and as a Christian (which I believe you said you were on your profile) we can't believe that.
I maybe looking into this a little much, but that's what it looked like. But keep up the good work!

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Amen to this
Spoken so very well and yes it seems like humanity kill so many just because we dont believe in the same identicle way its not the religeon that brings love and understanding to all its the love and understanding that brings faithe to all so I ask will we ever learn humanity each has a mind each have their own thoughts but only as one together will we ever see peace on earth




