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After OZ

now that tin man has a heart
he takes a class in art
he found  a tin woman
to call his sweetheart

now that lion
has become brave
he is king of the jungle,
others he must save

now that scarecrow
has a brain
he's read some books
and now he's sane

now that to-to
is home again
he has found himself wife
they are going to make a puppy life

now that Dorothy’s
back in Kansas
she tells of her dream
beneath the moon light beam
to her children
some believe, some do not
Oz is a dream never forgot

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OZ ten years after

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  • ShadedRequiem
    March 23, 2008

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    Aww. This is a really cute poem. I enjoyed it very much. Great write. Alyssa


  • macandrew
    March 20, 2008

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    I enjoyed the fourth stanza best in this as life continues and some will learn from others experiences and others won't.

    thanks for entering.
    John


  • buffsab99
    March 2, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful take on 10 years after. Good luck in the contest