winding wilderness path
through giant sentinels
as misty morning
greets the day
sun's rays shine
illuminate through canopy
moist earth below
majestic magic of forest
awe inspired by nature's beauty
God's creations for us to marvel
A contest entry
- Picture inspired-No Prewrites by AzureBlue.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - anything goes 10 lines of poetry by tony yates.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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excellent work
perfect piece, strong vocabulary, nice feel to it. well written, thanks/good luck -
Congrats on the silver!
A beautiful piece, goes so well with the picture. All the best in the contest with it
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Pretty good, eri! Nice interpretation of the picture - I see you picked up some silverware for this too, well done.
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oooooh! I absolutely LOVE your use of the word, "sentinels" in this piece. You have described a truly beautiful scene in a perfect, yet simple manner. Thank you for entering the contest!
Peace,
Lorena -
good luck tomorrow in this contest good poem inspired by picture these are fine lines/images:"majestic magic of forest
awe inspired by nature's beauty
God's creations
for us to marvel" good opening good alliteration im title thanks for sharing regards zaj
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this is very well layed out
i like the tranquil feeling this brings
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