You always knew about my love
for water as a cleansing force
the way it used to set me free
the way it used to be my source
And now you're out in the blue
far beyond my tear-stained reach
those few times when I feel you're close
are the only times I loose my speech
Then somehow you remember this
and arrange all clouds in line
to kiss away my loneliness
to take me from the hands of time
A contest entry
- Here's something interesting. by celestial.
300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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I liked this poem. Its soft and flowing. Good Job!! I also Have been reading your past poems as well. I really liked the one from 2006 about the wind. You inspire me!
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Thanks! Most of the time I'm inspired by other people, so it's nice to know I can inspire others too
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Rain is indeed wonderful in that sense. Thanks for sharing.
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