Twice the glory of one true love
But two times one don't equal three
One can last forever
One can last eternity
The competition's blazing
and there are four loving eyes
looking for the honor
of taking home the precious prize
Human nature is to envy
The legend is to fight
Twice the pain of broken hearts
will lead the beauty home tonight
Author notes
Option six, the quotes. I can't completely remember it, but it goes something like:
"I never said I'd fight fair."
"Neither did I."
I don't have the book with me, so I can't say the page number. But I believe it's from Eclipse... I hope that's okay...
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aw this is great! and yeah, you had the quote right
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eeek another team swiss!!! sorry i get a little excited when i find someone on the same team as me, just cuz every is either or and i completely agree why cant everyone get along...lol anyways i loved this, it definaly captures what that qoute is about, wonderful job
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great! but im gonna need you to put your name in the authors notes. because i'm going to open the contest so you can enter more than one poem soon. and i dont want to give somebody all the trophies.
"I didn't say I would fight fair." - Edward
"Neither did I." - Jacob
you had it basically write lol -
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Oops I knew I was firgetting SOMETHING! I'll fix that right away!
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Awwww! This is amazing and sooooo fitting! I loved it! AMAZING!!!! YAY!!! Lol
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I have never read the story but I still heart this poem!
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This is a really good write, I love the lines "The competition's blazing and there are four loving eyes
looking for the honor". You can really feel the competition between Edward and Jacob. Excellent use of the propmt, Thanks for entering, and good luck.
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I usually dislike rhyming poems. I don't like the restrictions the structure places on your writing. But this turned out well. I enjoyed reading it and it painted a picture for me. I love what you did with the prompt! Well done!!
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