So slowly, as you breathe,
I melt,
into the mist,
of rainy dusks without umbrellas,
hoping to blossom
as tulips, in icy skies -
just so, that when you wake,
I'll be your very own rainbow...
...and you,
my very own sunshine.
Author notes
Dedicated to the Sun of my life, my husband...
A contest entry
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I love your choice of words here, very beautiful indeed. I like the use of icy as well, as you wouldn't imagine it to fit with a poem like this but it actually does quite well.
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Very nice word choices. Very nice job.
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Haven
beautiful with nice usage words .they shine high like celestial stars
congrats
Haven
Haven for heaven
love !!
I forgot
key
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I really appreciate your kind words..
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