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early spring
swirling amongst the pollen
a sneeze
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A contest entry
- Aaaachooooo Haiku by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I always thought of sneezes as tiny fairies that flit there to get your attention and then catch a ride on the wind when I was young :)) I know it's silly, but I really did. This is lovely and make me remember that :))
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Nice haiku.
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Thanks
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early spring
swirling amongst the pollen
a sneeze
Thank you for entering my contest. No! I don't want my allergies to start already. Please say it isn't so. -
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LOLLLL Just joking..... hahahahaaaaaa!!!!
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this is a cute ku, but keep those sneezes in your area, I have enough here,lol you always bring such laughter to us, thank you...Moons
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Boy do I hear you here. I have an allergy to the maple tree sap each spring for about a month or more. Great Ku you!
Paul
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I love this one. Sneezes do swirl...at least I see them swirling as I try to hold my breath and not breathe someone else's virus in in case it's not hayfever...
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Nice spring haiku.
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Atishooo ! This is so good to read today, a tantilizing thought of Spring.... brings wonderful pictures to mind of what we have to come.
Katie
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LOL I guess every one is ready to sneeze! This was good!
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You are still sneezing...hope you carry a hanky...lol
A very good haiku as usual. Dare I wish you good luck in the contest.
~K
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