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full moon.

everything has its expiration date,
  and yours is up.

once or twice was enough, now everything is in vain.
i had bad moments that never failed to cease,

and i couldn't feel the same anymore.

we drank whenever we could,
regardless of the sun or moon.
we sang and we danced and we
cried
cried
cried

we hurt together.

i held your hands,
while your tears gently spilled into my lap.
and i wiped them
when i was close enough to feel your breath.

i could have imagined the hardest thing,
would have been to lose you.
but we did it anyway.

your heart glistens at the foot of
something i'm not so sure of.
i don't know you or me.

but i know your mouth is firm
as my lips brush yours.

Author notes

everything is over.
watch the video of greendays 'wake me up when septemeber comes'
".. no matter what you always have someone here for you, i'm never going to leave you"

inspiration.


1st march 08.

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  • Glitter-Trash
    March 5, 2008
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    sweetie this is so sad! =[


  • the atlantic
    March 5, 2008
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    this is gorgeous...


  • makeout kid
    March 4, 2008

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    i'm left speechless. there is so much i am wanting to say but the words have escaped me and i'm left dumbfounded, staring at the screen in awe. this was...just absolutely gorgeous. i could pick out my favorite parts, but honestly, it would only leave us with the entire piece copied and pasted here. i can relate to this right now...as audri already said...you really never know a person like you think you do. beautiful, babe.

    ily<333


  • girl shaman
    March 1, 2008

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    "your heart glistens at the foot of
    something i'm not so sure of.
    i don't know you or me"

    hm wow..
    i just am at a lose for words.
    those lines right there.. hit really really fucking hard because i just feel like no matter how much you think you know a person you really dont. in the end you lose what you thought you knew.
    thank you for writing this love
    i appreicate every word


    • petrichor
      March 2, 2008
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      thank you for your comment and understanding so well.
      ily. <33

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