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Celie the porn star

“Oh yes baby, now that’s what I’m talking about.
Spread those thighs a little more.
That’s it.
Let me get a close up.
Come on hun, act as if you are enjoying it.
Moan just a bit louder.
Oh yeah, you are making me hard.
Slide some fingers inside,
show the world why you are Celie,
the most sought after porn star there is.
Rise your hips a big higher.
Yes just like that love.
Fuck your little sex pot.
You are giving me some good shots now.
Deeper love, deeper.
Give me some expressions,
longing,
lust,
desire.
Perfect honey, just perfect.
Cut!”

“That was a take.
Bring Greg in.”

“That’s great!
That’s it, exactly what I wanted.
Rub that hardness against her opening,
make her beg for it.
Perfect.
Tease her cunt.
Just like that.
Look at those wings pouting for you.
Begging for you to take her and use her.
Let me get closer.
Uhmm, damn this is hot.
Look at her juices.
The camera is loving this.
Now give it to her.
Ram it into her.
Make her scream.
Come on Celie,
scream out his name.
That’s right.
Louder slut, louder.
Show the world what a slut you are.
Show them that you have what it takes to take all that cock.”

“Turn her over Greg.
Let’s get some ass action going here.
Celie I want to see pain in your eyes as he takes you.
Make it real,
Believable.
Ok Greg, give it to her.
Shove it all in.
That’s it.
Don’t spare her an inch.
Damn!
Give the bitch what she needs,
wants,
deserves.”

“Greg get under her.
Yes just like that.
Now shove that rod up her ass again.
Bounce on that cock Celie.
Louder cunt, louder.
Damn whore,
this camera man is ready explode looking at your gaping,
juice drench hole.
You need another cock don’t you baby?
Bring Mike in here!”

“That’s right Mike.
Get right between her legs.
Slam it into her.
Let me get a close up,
that’s it.
Oh, I love that expression in your eyes Celie.
You’re desperate aren’t you?
You need one more cock.
You have one more tunnel for a ready cock.
Brad get in here!”

“Perfect!
Make her gag on it.
Fuck that mouth!
Now that is what a slut should look like.
All holes taking a banging at once.
These are the best shots out there.
Work those money makers.
Yessss.
Give it to her.
I am capturing every minute of this.
Work those holes.
That’s right,
three cocks slamming into her at once.
You are loving this, aren’t you Celie?
You are showing the world who is the queen slut.
Milk those cocks for all that you are worth.
Cum slut, cum for the world.
Let us see the juices gushing from your holes.
Oh yes, the camera is picking up the juices perfectly.
Damn girl, you look like the dam have busted!
Pull all the cocks out so that I can get some after shots.
Look at you covered in drool and cum.
This is some hot stuff.”

        Getting up off the bed, Celie picked up the three vibrators  that she had used and went to wash them off. Coming back to their bedroom, she watch quietly as Dan put the camera things away.
        “Damn Dan, I thought you were going to choke me when you shoved the last one down my throat.”
        “I’m sorry Celie, I didn’t mean to be so rough there. Hey baby, you were good at this. Maybe some day we should really make a film of you in action.”
        “Oh no you don’t Dan, the only man I want to fuck me is you and you know it.”
        “That’s why I married you hun, I couldn’t bare the thought of you going without for the rest of your life. I had to marry you to make sure you were getting it.”
        “And that’s the only reason?”
        “Ok, ok, I admit it, maybe I couldn’t stand the thought of someone else getting to eat your fried chicken. You’re the best cook to ever come out of Clarke county.”
        Laughing at him, Celie crawled back into bed after putting the toys away. “Come here Dan and show me why I married you.”
        Sliding into bed beside her, Dan took her into her arms, “Do you think you have enough left in you for me?”
        “I have more than enough. First set the alarm, I promised the kids that we would get an early start tomorrow. I wish that you could come with us.”
        “Yeah, me too, but Greg, Mike and I promised Brad that we would work on his car.”
        “You don’t ever tell them that we use them in our little games do you?”
        “Instead or asking me so many questions, how about giving your husband some of the loving that you gave them? Come here you, open up for the real man in your life.”

Author notes

for the group challenge Erotic Mistresses Masters slaves and pets. my challenge was to write a poem or short story involving role play.

http://allpoetry.com/board/topic/268572253

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  • Kirjava
    March 8, 2008
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    Hot stuff!

  • night4owl
    March 6, 2008
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    Very Hot stuff


  • slipperssun gold member
    March 3, 2008
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    lol well done... i expected it to really be the fellas... great challenge point
    cheers
    Jen


    • shimmer
      March 3, 2008
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      thank you Jen for your kind words. i wanted to do something a bit different and glad that it came together.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    March 1, 2008

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    Well done shimmer..

    I think this is very well thought out. I did want to bring one thing to your attention though....

    In the line " Getting up off the bed, Celie picked up the three viberators that she had used and went to wash them off" I believe you mispelled "vibrators".

    **Master Ktulu**

    • shimmer
      March 3, 2008

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      i never wrote roleplay before so wasnt sure how to go about it so i am glad that you liked this.

      ouch i can't believe of all words for me to spell wrong, it was the word vibrator lol. i did change the spelling and thank you for catching it for me.

  • mcfreeman
    March 1, 2008

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    Interesting point of view

    The transition from "action" to hubby was a jump cut at best. I liked the idea that making a porn scene is not sexy. But what is the turn on here? This is the framework for an interesting story.

    • shimmer
      March 3, 2008
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      i dont know what the turn on is, i guess the idea of a woman making a film of this nature and using the imagination of the action that is being described by the cameraman.

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