when you see
the sky white
you think of it
heaven
to a sea
that is green
you notion
a meadow
This place-
no flowers will
grow
like a tireless
wind
I brush many
faces
I am colorless
in dreams
till the moment--
I touch you
A contest entry
- do you know your colour(s)? by Nicolette.
2200 points, ended March 23, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your most personal & meaningful poem from ( 2008 ) by justgot2loveme.
1500 points, ended December 11, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem is so pretty.
I really love it.
The ending is sweet and loving.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Justgot2loveme
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This "colourless" poem just pulls a sigh, a deep one from me, Mally. It is so very soft and romantic and the ending is great - such a nice, comforting surprise there! This poem speaks of how we are coloured beautiful by touching, by loving.
Just beautiful - thank you for sharing your colour with us in this contest.
~ Nicolette
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nice
nice write on love . . liked "like a tireless wind I brush many faces" . . "I am colorless to dreams" . . good luck in the contest as well
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You are a romantic I think. You have a touch of romance in all that I have read of yours. Very well done. You could make our heads swoon anytime you like. Good luck in the contest.
Kelli
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Ahh Mally
Your words bring to me a sigh.
The beauty here is deeply touching
and very relatable for me as of late.
You have such a wonderful way with words.
Blessings
Bel
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what a lovely poem this is, the desire to have an old love be back in ones life,thank you for sharing good luck in her contest...Moons
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the colors of love is what your write reminds me of beutiful write. God bless
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this wrapped around me...what a beautiful poem. love, lane
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