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With November Comes

Transitioning whispers lingering

as nature’s dirge drifts

slowly across

 

melancholy fields

where seasonal travelers

coldly contemplate

 

warmer climes with

understood anxiety as

flights of fancy are formed

 

and vitality is traded

for yet distant promise

of renewed vigor

 

as winter’s blanket

looms in autumn’s fringes;

and I shiver~  

 

Author notes

I was born on a cold, blustery morning in November.

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  • Namita silver member
    April 9

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    Yes, such a chilly write, this one! This piece is filled with subtle and beautiful alliteration...! Now, this is making me too shiver!! Lovely write! Thanks for entering

    - namita


  • me and nothing else
    March 29

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    You know how to keep the reader longing for more! Very well done. I like your style of writing. Check out my poems! ANd don't forget to comment!


  • Faithbound gold member
    March 4

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    I'm shivering now. Winter is so cold. I love her but yet wish she would leave. It's a love\hate relationship...Best wishes in the contest.

  • fortyninereasons silver member
    March 1

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    It is strange to hear November depicted as cold. I now dont want winter to arrive. Great write!!! J


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 1

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    Oooo I got all chilly reading this! Still sounds beautiful tho! I think your part of the world must be stunning in it's different seasons my friend!
    Another stunning piece!


  • sweet angel rose
    March 1

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    As the pictures on your authors page show your locality, I for one would love to experience the seasons as you portray them. Here in my country they are not as well defined and seem to be drifting one into another.
    A great poem depicting the month, and you alsp made me shiver.

    Thank you
    ~Rose~

  • ashjoe76
    March 1

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    winter’s blanket

    looms in autumn’s fringes;

    and I shiver~

    A great work of heart friend...congrats!


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 1

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    This is one of your usual standard MJ and although it is brilliant........can we please have spring and summer before we have to think of those times again? The years pass all too quickly. Good luck with this.

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