breathing your essence
ardor becomes a sin
exciting rhythm swells
the sun's warmth pales
your longing body exudes
urges to take an impulse
thirsty sultry love strokes
soon ignite a torrid day
Author notes
prompt: use an element of nature (sun) to write a love poem . .
8 lines
A contest entry
- Here's something interesting. by celestial.
300 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"ardor becomes a sin" good line nice ending to this vg title thanks for sharing regards zaj
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This was lovely. Love how you used the prompt.
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This poem is warm and wicked. Oh! How I long to feel hot summer sunshine on my back.
Thanks for starting my day with such a splendid thought.
Love, Peter
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