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Murder

A scream in the dark,
a mutilated body,
no-one hears
and no-one sees.

Why is no-one caught?

A death in an alley,
a murder in a night,
a killer on the prowl;
but no-one knows who.

Why do these things happen?

Evading capture
and arrest
more die
with blood curling screams.

Why is there no justice?

Yet no-one hears;
they only see
the horror that's left,
the body in the street.

Why does a murderer walk free?

Author notes

Prompt:-
blood curdling screams rebound
upon endless silence -
-The Darkened Soul

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 3, 2008

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    I know exactly what you mean, why not? Love it thougb, because I love the crime channel and all things like that, because I find it fascinating and like to see how weird peoples mind works. Nicely written here.


    • DarkStatic
      March 4, 2008
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      Yeah it's annoying isn't it. Thanks I like watching things like CSI and Numbers. It really is fascinating how peoples minds work. Thank you!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    March 1, 2008
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    wow... lol
    this is deep n dark n amazeing!
    well down sweety
    *pats beautiful dragon *