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Touch of Heaven

Touches turn into Heaven
as
my body turns angelic
and your hands mold around hips
like a halo
Eyes close and fall into dreams
that slowly
  come
         true
Your touch studies my movements

and memorizes what causes my

skin to dance like waves
Your moans paint my lips
with a tint of
“forever”

as tongues write stories only you and I

can read

You say you never thought it could feel this good

and

as I agree

my eyes escape in the tilt of my head

while words run to you and whisper
“Oh My God"

 

 

 

 

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 18, 2008

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    Wow,

    You have a way with expressing your talent upon these poetic pages your passion within you display so beautifully! Thanks for the excellent read, and keeping it spicy! Much love, and Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • nessa1980
    March 10, 2008
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    WOW!!!!!! Way a make it happen!


  • moluv10
    March 3, 2008

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    Very good! i love your take on the picture. Excellent word usage in this great freewrite. I love reading your work. it's so good. Keep it up.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    oh man... wow

    This is so good Layne! easily one of your best!


  • macandrew
    March 1, 2008

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    and your hands mold around hips
    like a halo

    Beautifully written. Now I must read more of your poems.

    John


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 1, 2008

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    A wonderfully sensual and delicate dance of words my dear; well done.


    mj.

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